Can you critique my drawing.?

Hello guys I drew a draft of a dreamcatcher and I want some feedback. Is there anything I should add to it or take out. I must point out that I drew my drawing on paper and after I took a pic on my phone. I started editing it and coloring it so this is how it would look like so can you guys please help me thank you.

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  • Anonymous
    2 months ago
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    The feathers are a bit lurid and the composition is a bit too symmetrical, especially the outer pairs of feathers. Otherwise it looks like you are having fun. You might want to consider what you do with the background, is it hanging from something is there a wall or a window behind it could there be shadows or reflections.

  • For me, this is already good.

  • 2 months ago

    More shading on the feathers,  they look too much like a coloring book page. 

  • 2 months ago

    I like this. I think it's good as is.

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  • Jake
    Lv 5
    2 months ago

    Looks better than an actual dream catcher I made

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