C asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 month ago

What do you think?

Would this be considered poetry? Why or why not? What is your opinion of it?

Hold my hand

please, hold my hand

and let me feel soft

sounds pass between us.

I need but little wonders to revel in,

intermittently, like the cool 

regular pace of breath or 

your heart, at my ear.

Audiably palatable, sustain me.

Stir, clear your throat,

say nothing, but

let soft sounds pass between us.

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  • 1 month ago

    A charming and pleasant read.

  • 1 month ago

    :)   Lerv.

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