Is this poem grammatically correct?
How I wish I could have had
A husband with white and high forehead.
Narrow foreheads are not cool at all.
Now who's going to heal my broken soul
A life with an ugly man is harder than you think
How I wish my family name were Wellings
by me lol
(So I have a homework. Today we read a story named Hannah and we should write a poem about Hannah's regrets, as if we were Hannah. Could spot my mistakes?? Thanks!!)
- 7FlightsupLv 62 months agoFavorite Answer
A husband with a white and high forehead.
- 2 months ago
with a white and high (the article is important sometimes)
period after forehead.
period after all.Now who is (always better in poetry not abbreviate if possible) going to heal my broken soul ? It is a question right?(unless Who is the one who is) lol Then it is a statement .. Period after soul.period after think.was Wellings. Period after Wellings.
You ask for grammatically correct right?