Can i have a feedback for my poem?
There is no nation as glorious as our motherland-India
Which is utterly Alluring and Exquisite
Having Geographical features divergent and absolutely elegant.
Like Mountain ranges like the snow-covered Himalayas in the north and the Nilgiris in the South.
Or coasts like the Malabar and Coromandal which are nothing less than sublime.
Our history is filled is filled with lustre and splendour;
Our Monuments Built with grandour
Like the Taj Mahal with Marble has been mold;
It beautifies our planet tenfold
Nowhere do we see this sort of passion and zeal
These are things to never conceal.
India is a land of legends and epics
Like the Ramayana and Mahabharata
If you don't know them....Then you're just pathetic.
Our country is home to Tagore a great soneteer
His work will be recalled for zillions of years.
A garden is filled with different types of flowers yet it's unity in diversity is what makes truly enchanting,and so is our country which comprises of races of different kinds yet we stand tall United and as one living with peace and harmony.
Every human wants to go to heaven once theyve met their end...Well thats where we aldready are...Our motherland is indeed paradise on Earth.
And of course a very happy Independence day 🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳
- 3 months agoBest Answer
It is a good poem. Very well written
- 2 months ago
I think it helps sink information in to the subconscious mind more thourghly. Makes it easier to remember.
- 2 months ago
I'm just not picking anything up about telemarketers, phishers or scammers trying to gain access to my windows PC (while pretending to be Microsoft employees), sorry but its just not typically India or Indians to me, nothign about curry too... strange
- Guru HankLv 72 months ago
Very Rapey Country.
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- Anonymous2 months ago
What poem???What poem??
- Lapiz DominoesLv 73 months ago
You need alter the line re `pathetic` or it alienatez, and it zourz the grandeur of your fine poem.
- RuthLv 43 months ago
I think it's a bit simple and straightforward, but if that's what you were going for then it's not a bad thing! The part I think you need to work on is the bit that starts "A garden.." and ends with "...peace and harmony," that's a very long section that I think should be broken up some more somehow.
- Sir CausticLv 63 months ago
Ramayana and Mahabharata? Never heard of them. You've just made up those names. It's obvious. Still, it's nice to see Native Americans getting poems written about them. Well done.