Do you like my poem A Leap of Love?

She made a promise to her mother

To learn to dance just like no other

But she could feel it in her vision

To never make one bad decision

You see her mom had done a move so daring

And found the floor was not so sparing

And now she’s slightly paralyzed

Her dream is done unrealized

Well as time went by a new contest

Her daughter vowed to be the best

She felt her mother watching her

Praying old events will not occur

But she glided to that very move

And did the leap and found her groove

Then like Fred Astaire did with a broom

She danced the floor and swept that room

Then in her ears there came a roar

The votes were in a perfect score

And to all the others who had tried

With that leap of love they were denied

But a vision seen then was not kept

Her mom forgave her as they wept

They felt their tears, they shared their cries

Her mom had won now through her eyes

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  • 3 years ago

    its fine and shares a common theme

    and i just watched the movie version...............Patti Cake$

    Mother falls off the bar LMAO

    catcalling and street harassing ..............but the ending ..........it made me cry:)

    dont forget to mark it with a B

  • 3 years ago

    Yes,the story is good and the format,rhymes etc. are fine.

  • 3 years ago

    Great Poem!

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