Could u please help me to check this sentence below? I found this sentence in Wikipedia English, but I think there's something wrong with it?

Ok, here's the sentence. "The British Ministry of Food refined the rationing process in the early 1940s to ensure the population did not starve when food imports were severely restricted and local production limited due to the large number of men fighting the war."

Local production limited due to the large number of men fighting the war?

1) limited due to... Is this participle worked as an attributive?

2) due to the large number of men fighting the war. Here "of men fighting the war" fighting" is used as gerund and "men" as its logical subject.

Am I right there?

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  • Anonymous
    4 years ago
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    Limited due to is a reduced adjective clause. The full version would be "production WHICH was limited due to... So yes, it is now a past participle functioning as an adjective, modifying "production".

    "Fighting the war" is also a reduced adjective clause- 'men WHO were fighting the war." In this case it's the present participle functioning as an adjective, not a noun, so it's not a gerund.

    There's nothing wrong with the sentence, except that "due to" is cliched and frowned on stylistically.

  • 4 years ago

    During the early part of the 2nd World War Britain was fighting alone against the Germans, Italians, and Japanese. Food and materials were being bought from the USA on what was known as 'Lend-lease' which continued until the USA joined us in 1940 after Pearl Harbour. Up until then, they were bleeding us dry. naturally as most men of eligible age were fighting the war production of food and the management of farms fell to women so production of crops was severely affected.

    As far as the grammar is concerned I would add a comma after 'restricted' and 'limited'. Any verb that describes an action is a gerund so, in this case, 'fighting' could be seen as one. An attributive clause is one where it qualifies or modifies the word it precedes and expressing an attribute. I don't think 'limited due to' is one as there should be a comma after limited'

  • Anonymous
    4 years ago

    This is a perfectly normal sentence. Don't throw advanced grammatical terms around if you can't understand simple concepts like "this was limited due to that" or "people doing something."

  • Anonymous
    4 years ago

    I see nothing wrong at all with this. Perhaps the asker is looking for something thats not there ? What they say is true. Imports were limited because of the U Boat menace. I dont think lack of men was a huge problem as many women took over and farming was a reserved occupation (men did not need to go in army as their job was important)

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  • 4 years ago

    The sentence makes sense. The writing style is clipped, but structurally the sentence is solid.

    It manages to rehash the causative circumstances, buttressing the main topic. At the same time, those factors are not elaborated excessively to overshadow the brief description of food rationing system(s).

    Food imports severely restricted.

    Local food production is limited.

    Local production suffers shortages because not enough people are available to assist in view of displaced workers fighting at war.

    Rationing is the main topic by force of necessity. The war indirectly causes it, but the war cannot be explained in some small sample from the myriad effects it produces.

    Instead of

    1. major war

    2a. lack of imports 2b. lack of local food production

    3a. rationing

    3b/4. special rationing system

    ... the overview jumps into the topic and lists principal causative factors simply and summarily without getting entangled.

  • Bazza
    Lv 7
    4 years ago

    I would just add a comma:

    ...when food imports were severely restricted and local production limited, due to the large number of men fighting the war."

    I too hate 'due to' and 'owing to'.

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