Duke asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 8 years ago

what is a good way to start a song about death?

hummm near necrophilia but showing a lot of angst and depression towards a dead girl

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hummm near necrophilia but showing a lot of angst and depression towards a dead girl that died from suicide

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  • 8 years ago
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    Something about the depression

    arising due to repressed sexual feelings for the young girl while she lived

    might be a relieving and creative (not just constructive..creation can embrace chaos comfortably

    once it`s accepted as an unravelling of order or creating of a clearer beginning).....?

    :) (: good luck..a new insightful elegaic for us and mainly for you?

  • ?
    Lv 5
    8 years ago

    I drink those teardrops as I'm kissing your corpse ...

    but only ... if you were alive ... of course ...

    Never leave me and never you left ...

    Our hearts entwined in angels cleft ...

    Nobody can depart me for you are about me ...

    Let them say my romance is nothing but free ...

    Refuse do I ... to defuse the we ...

    You are she and I am still your key ...

    Forever locked mystery of eternity we be ...

  • Anonymous
    8 years ago

    Well how did she die? Suicide? Car crash? Stabbed?

    It could go something like "the last breath of air she had, who knew it would of have been her last"

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