My The gifter performer poem comments?

As I sit here at the bar

While she plays her new guitar

I wonder how she’ll leave this place

Her purse is surely full of mace

She looks at me, and she does say

Can I play your song today

I think it sorta goes likes this

Just give me time to reminisce

Her voice is sharp and crystal clear

The kind you really want to hear

And when that gal begins to wail

She sounds just like a nightingale

She packs the place on Monday night

She spurs the crowd with shear delight

And she really has a look

That you can’t find, in no book

As we dance around those barroom mats

We hold onto our cowboy hats

There’s really nothing more to say

That girl can make you want to stay

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    that's awesome, I like your rhythm and I like your poem. great job. Yeehaw cowboy lol.

  • doe
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    This is a keeper. Cowboys have always been a favorite of mine but they gotta like more than country music - I'm just sayin... This has a real nice feel to it, makes me wish I was there.

  • 1 decade ago

    This is such a wonderful and serene poem as i felt the going on and wish i was there dancing to the song with my cowboy; cheek to cheek..

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