My The gifter performer poem comments?
As I sit here at the bar
While she plays her new guitar
I wonder how she’ll leave this place
Her purse is surely full of mace
She looks at me, and she does say
Can I play your song today
I think it sorta goes likes this
Just give me time to reminisce
Her voice is sharp and crystal clear
The kind you really want to hear
And when that gal begins to wail
She sounds just like a nightingale
She packs the place on Monday night
She spurs the crowd with shear delight
And she really has a look
That you can’t find, in no book
As we dance around those barroom mats
We hold onto our cowboy hats
There’s really nothing more to say
That girl can make you want to stay
- Anonymous1 decade agoFavorite Answer
that's awesome, I like your rhythm and I like your poem. great job. Yeehaw cowboy lol.
- doeLv 71 decade ago
This is a keeper. Cowboys have always been a favorite of mine but they gotta like more than country music - I'm just sayin... This has a real nice feel to it, makes me wish I was there.
- Dark Angel 1Lv 71 decade ago
This is such a wonderful and serene poem as i felt the going on and wish i was there dancing to the song with my cowboy; cheek to cheek..