The Underground Railroad comments?

Tice David's a name, you will now know

From Kentucky he tried, to make Ohio

With his Master behind, not loosing site

Just a river to cross, then hide in the night

He then disappeared and no one would tell where

He now smelt how sweet, was freedoms night air

And from that time, his story was told

That somehow he found an underground road

And from that day, a phrase formed their plight

An Under Ground Railroad, was named for that night

These trains had no course or a set track

These parcels just knew, what lies to their back

Now Levi was penned as the rails President

Because 2,000 stayed at his residence

They all had some names for who carried the cause

But they just really cared, that's just what is was

But don't think this train was buried back then

All over this world it is born again

Wherever it's needed these wheels will still role

Some wanted North, and some now want Seoul

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Hi. Very nice, i like the pattern, the expectations you put out, the flowing , the language, the story telling is very reflective , the feelings and emotions to the end of the poem give your readers a vivid imagine of this great poem. Keep on writing. Peace out.

  • 1 decade ago

    Very nice and enlightening poem and it's so great that people had friends like these; to help them get safe passages for all who came. with faith in their hearts.

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    1 decade ago

    i really liked it!

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