The Underground Railroad comments?
Tice David's a name, you will now know
From Kentucky he tried, to make Ohio
With his Master behind, not loosing site
Just a river to cross, then hide in the night
He then disappeared and no one would tell where
He now smelt how sweet, was freedoms night air
And from that time, his story was told
That somehow he found an underground road
And from that day, a phrase formed their plight
An Under Ground Railroad, was named for that night
These trains had no course or a set track
These parcels just knew, what lies to their back
Now Levi was penned as the rails President
Because 2,000 stayed at his residence
They all had some names for who carried the cause
But they just really cared, that's just what is was
But don't think this train was buried back then
All over this world it is born again
Wherever it's needed these wheels will still role
Some wanted North, and some now want Seoul
- RosalindaLv 71 decade agoFavorite Answer
Hi. Very nice, i like the pattern, the expectations you put out, the flowing , the language, the story telling is very reflective , the feelings and emotions to the end of the poem give your readers a vivid imagine of this great poem. Keep on writing. Peace out.
- Dark Angel 1Lv 71 decade ago
Very nice and enlightening poem and it's so great that people had friends like these; to help them get safe passages for all who came. with faith in their hearts.
- <3Lv 41 decade ago
i really liked it!