My wifes scheme for riches poem, entertaining?

My wife says now she has a scheme

To get her rich which is her dream

She says she has a new idea

It came to mind the thought is clear

She says she'll need to get a pattern

To make it safe so it will happen

There will be some that truly doubt it

But after time wont live without it

She says its like a magic potion

You rub it in just like a lotion

And then big things will just appear

Its sure to get a mate in gear

Some will see it as a crutch

Because right now they don't get much

Lets see now just how fast things grow

But don't stand close, one never knows

Then suddenly I heard things popping

And all her clothes were clearly dropping

I said maybe it's a tad too strong

But the view is great don't get me wrong

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
    Best Answer

    Nice poem, and very entertaining too! I'll be waiting for you to write another!

  • luth
    Lv 4
    3 years ago

    nicely, i think of a few aspects of this poem is unique and actually touching at situations. although, an area of this of this poem is amazingly perplexing, subsequently making this poem somewhat uncertain. as an occasion, I had some subject concerns with those final 2 strains: That any day your mom’s right here no remember what it’s my turn expensive To me, it particularly isn't needed. What does her mom could desire to do with the main important concern of this poem? If she does, be greater particular with a view to grant this poem greater readability. Plus, interior the final line, you're able to desire to be greater sparkling of what you're bearing on. besides that, it particularly is a touch unique poem, even though it desires some sharpening.

  • 1 decade ago

    Very funny, well written and quite entertaining!! Tell your wife, well done.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Very entertaining.

    I love your poems.

    Nice work:)

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  • 1 decade ago

    nice but there is to much she !!!

  • 1 decade ago

    LOL - great! Thanks for my morning chuckle.

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