My wifes scheme for riches poem, entertaining?
My wife says now she has a scheme
To get her rich which is her dream
She says she has a new idea
It came to mind the thought is clear
She says she'll need to get a pattern
To make it safe so it will happen
There will be some that truly doubt it
But after time wont live without it
She says its like a magic potion
You rub it in just like a lotion
And then big things will just appear
Its sure to get a mate in gear
Some will see it as a crutch
Because right now they don't get much
Lets see now just how fast things grow
But don't stand close, one never knows
Then suddenly I heard things popping
And all her clothes were clearly dropping
I said maybe it's a tad too strong
But the view is great don't get me wrong
- Anonymous1 decade agoFavorite Answer
Nice poem, and very entertaining too! I'll be waiting for you to write another!
- luthLv 44 years ago
nicely, i think of a few aspects of this poem is unique and actually touching at situations. although, an area of this of this poem is amazingly perplexing, subsequently making this poem somewhat uncertain. as an occasion, I had some subject concerns with those final 2 strains: That any day your mom’s right here no remember what it’s my turn expensive To me, it particularly isn't needed. What does her mom could desire to do with the main important concern of this poem? If she does, be greater particular with a view to grant this poem greater readability. Plus, interior the final line, you're able to desire to be greater sparkling of what you're bearing on. besides that, it particularly is a touch unique poem, even though it desires some sharpening.
- kissaledLv 51 decade ago
Very funny, well written and quite entertaining!! Tell your wife, well done.
- Anonymous1 decade ago
I love your poems.
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- 1 decade ago
nice but there is to much she !!!
- MargueriteLv 71 decade ago
LOL - great! Thanks for my morning chuckle.