My poem, My wifes daily shower, is it humerous?

When she takes her daily shower

It always takes her near an hour

I wonder what she does in there

Does it take that long to wash her hair

She says she needs to wash each spot

Cause she will smell, if she does not

I think she needs a shower tutor

I’ll look for one on the computer

I guess that was a bad idea

I don’t need all those weirdo’s here

I just need one to talk her through it

Everyone just wants to help her do it

One morning my son had to go

I told him wait, but he said no

He went upstairs and flushed the jon

My wife yelled yikes, what’s going on

Then all I hear is the dogs howling

And their in sync with my cat meowing

So theres the thing that bothers me

Is that she can’t sing like on TV

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    I get it..

    You can't understand why she stays in the shower so long,

    no one can clean for that long,, but its the shower singing that allows her to stay for so long in the shower. But in that the dogs and cats even sound better than her even if its a shower song, which acoustically should sound better.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Very funny. And I'm "in the shower", too, and my huz wonders the same thing. I'd change the last 2 lines, though. I think you could end it better.

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  • 1 decade ago

    YES, very funny! Fix spelling and grammar though - it interrupts the flow when someone stops and says, "their? Oh, he means they're!"

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  • 1 decade ago

    It's worth a smile, but man you have to work on your syllables.

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  • 1 decade ago

    If you mean does it weep pus, which is what humerous means, No

    If you mean is it funny (humorous) then, yes, reasonably so.

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  • 1 decade ago

    if i was in front of you, you would be hearing appalls; nice and funny hope to hear more

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  • 1 decade ago

    hahaha, cool, i like it, you got sense of humour.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    a bit humourous.....but really a good work !

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  • 1 decade ago

    funny. last verse needs help...

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  • 1 decade ago

    cute poem.

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