Is this a good story?

Question

where the darkness creeps
the story is set in 1989 to 1995, about story of Ashles Zakerberg at the age of nine to sixteen
she lives in Deirwood boarding with her best friend Cathy prince. (who becomes her enemy.) her love Walton Champ, ( who becomes her nightmare.) stranger Aria Coin. (who becomes her best friend.) the bully Valentino montez, (becomes her allie) and her secret best friend Wester Coin, ( who become her love>0

but Deirwood isn't really a boarding school its just there to help students to become organ donors, to give there vital organs to ill people who need new ones and die young.
But Ashles want more out of life, so when she hears rumors on how not to become a organ donor, is by knowing what is the purpose of living.
and of course Ashles escapes Deirwood with Wester, Valantino and Walton they meet new people
new monsters that creep in the dark
but will Ashles find the purpose of living or will she die young anyway

Answer 1

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker

Yes. Anyone with a mind to write stories has great potential to become a great writer. You just need to to maybe make it a bit more simple to attract the kids of today...but you don't ever need anyone's opinion to keep writing. Keep writing!!! :)

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Asker's Comment:

thank you i shall keep writting :)

Answer 2

I think it sounds good but you shouldn't put in not the internet like this because ppl can steal your idea

Answer 3

No copyright !

Answer 4

wat

Answer 5

cool